
Even with one eye I was able to find out about sam and eric's little fright goose bump. I don't think the beastie is real. They probably just imagined it or are playing a joke on mutinous Jack. On Mr. Im the toughest. He is a total wimp. My one eye caught his guano face so sacred I think he might have taken a short in his shorts. He and all the others heard the name, the beast, or as I like to relate him to jack as... the leviathan. Jack is as the beastie both so evil and seems like they both want to hurt someone and enjoy it. I heard that the beast got hold of erics leg. I imagine myself out there dead. All those creepers and that beastie thing what else is bad on this island. Ralph diffidently as leader toook charge as to go first, while Jack for a second didn't want to go saw Ralphs bravery even though he wasn't a hunter... Jack passed him and wandered toward the front so he could be the first to warn every one about the beast but not himself, Ralph took care of that. Me. I had to take care of the little ones. One eye out there wouldn't help but just make things slower. Ofcourse I wanted to go, I mean lokking at the destructon of this island would just be down right awesome. All of us.. the ones on this island are completely embroiled and not just the kind that is easy to fix, but the kind that can kill, hurt until the last one is there and wins or surenders.
If we win this island than that means that we have a chance of surviving but so far this beast seems tough, large, strong, fast, and a murderer. Almost the smae charecteristics as jack. The way sam and eric described this beast scared me even though I haven't even seen it. I want to be rescued. Also I find myself one of the ucky ones as to not have to travel up those horrid rocks and be killed by something you never even met before.. a stranger. The grown ups really did send us signs... The dead man in the parachute thing, Johnny diying first who's next? And now the beastie. I mean we had trouble with where to take shorts, shelter, the conch and who gets to talk, and even the fire. So does this all add up and mean something.
I hate Jack, and Ralph has been somewhat annoying. Yes, he is the leader but not the boss of us too much. I don't know about all these people but I actually want to survive and go home. I don't know if Ralph and them know it or not, but like I really need to go visit my auntie. She is probably worried sick, and misses me too. If only I could tell her adn all the other paretns who is living and who has died and where we are. So, they could come and take us back home, I don't even care about the war. t seems this is just as dangerous. The war and this island are like pepsi and coca cola.... practically the same with a diffrent name,and didffrent conseqences. I need sleep and my eye needs rest. Hope fully I can find a way to fix this side of my glasses.
If we win this island than that means that we have a chance of surviving but so far this beast seems tough, large, strong, fast, and a murderer. Almost the smae charecteristics as jack. The way sam and eric described this beast scared me even though I haven't even seen it. I want to be rescued. Also I find myself one of the ucky ones as to not have to travel up those horrid rocks and be killed by something you never even met before.. a stranger. The grown ups really did send us signs... The dead man in the parachute thing, Johnny diying first who's next? And now the beastie. I mean we had trouble with where to take shorts, shelter, the conch and who gets to talk, and even the fire. So does this all add up and mean something.
I hate Jack, and Ralph has been somewhat annoying. Yes, he is the leader but not the boss of us too much. I don't know about all these people but I actually want to survive and go home. I don't know if Ralph and them know it or not, but like I really need to go visit my auntie. She is probably worried sick, and misses me too. If only I could tell her adn all the other paretns who is living and who has died and where we are. So, they could come and take us back home, I don't even care about the war. t seems this is just as dangerous. The war and this island are like pepsi and coca cola.... practically the same with a diffrent name,and didffrent conseqences. I need sleep and my eye needs rest. Hope fully I can find a way to fix this side of my glasses.
Claudia-
ReplyDeleteReally good job! I like it. Great use of the vocabulary words and details from the chapter! The only things I would recommend to do are add the perspective character (in this case Piggy, I think) to the top title, and also read over your work a second time, so you can catch all the little typos. :)
-Matty
I like how descriptive you were. You used the vocabulary words really. It was easy to under stand. I agree with Matty on the perspective of piggy. Other hen that its really good.
ReplyDeletei agree with matty. i like how the vocabulary really goes with what you are writig. maybe you could put a picture on next time for extra credit
ReplyDeleteWOW! Great job of staying in character as piggy. Very descriptive, I think the only things you could do are check your grammar and if you want to, add a picture
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